Do you understand this page?

If the main object of the page is to show that the product is made up of two parts why not go back to basics? ...... an A + B = C layout panel across the page, three diagrams or photos to illustrate the component parts. A few words could then simply explain the concept.

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It looks like two products.

It's going to be like that situation where people went to buy a computer and asked if they could just have the screen and the keyboard because they didn't think they needed "that big expensive tower bit".

I would sell it as one product - Music On Hold Complete Package at

This page does not make sense.

Thanks all will go back to drawing board on this.

I agree, sell it as one package for one price. If you need both to make it work why sell as separate anyway?

ditto to all of the above, image looks good but does not help to explain the purpose or how the total cost is arrived at. I am guessing but suspect the MP3 element is a personalised message/music unique to that customer. (its still better than my website though..!)..oh hum and thats not a sales pitch.

Hi there,

I would like to give you some relevant feedback for the site from a customers point of view.

As I come onto the website i see the image of a business man next to a black board saying marketing.
What does that have to say about the on hold music?

Also I would change the name to Music while your on hold and have an image of a person on a telephone.

There could be a lot more benefits of the client using the system rather than what it does, people don't buy a product knowing what it does. They buy on how it can make there lives or clients lives easier.

hope this helps.

I don't mean to come across negative if I have at all.

Tomsk, I love you dearly, but standard WP theme!

I feel the love kip - but client wanted cheap and cheerful.

Really only a landing page site for a ppc campaign.

She/He is paying for the PPC to land on there? To what gain if I may ask?